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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The head is slightly elongated I don't particularly think its too long but I think you've made the chin too pointy so it makes the head look skinny therefore appear to be too long when really I think it is proportionate.
The lighting is a bit uncertain but I often have problems with this too especially when there re objects facing different directions i.e. her body is facing front but her head and pink scarf thing is almost too the side and it can be a b***h to get the lighting exactly right. It doesn't look WRONG either so the lighting isn't a factor that bothers me at all...
I think there is a lot of detail to this although it looks like you got a bit lazy an rushed the wings- that or you do what I do where you spend so long on a picture you forget just ONE thing and you go back to it in its exported form and it harder to edit XD but yes the wings are cartoon like compared to the more anime look that you have given angewoman
And to sum up really, I love it
The wings need more detail to bring out the fairness of the drawing and the breast pad need to be less shiny because it looks like rusty breast pad
Try to keep the size of the head balanced or it will be like alien cosplaying.
Need to have more hair on the breast
Overall certain area such as wing need to be more 3d-like and more shading to keep the whole picture balanced. Good work though and work hard to keep improving.
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