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Digimon - Angewomon by Serisegala Digimon - Angewomon by Serisegala
Angewomon

Digimon 15th(game) / 13th(anime) anniversary.
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At first look this looks pretty good, but on closer look there are several areas which I could see improvements on.

Mostly gripes with the head

The direction she's looking toward looks uncomfortable. (side profile on a forward facing torso) some tilt on her body towards the right would be nice, something like what you have on your wargreymon piece.

Lips look thin, again because of the side profile angle (bottom lip looks better because of the. Some defining protrusion where the lips are may help.

Assuming her helmet fits her head snugly, her head is really big/long, judging by the nose which starts from just below her helmet. Also, according to that, there should be some empty space in the front, to allow some space for her nose.

Her 'helmet' is more of a mask. It doesn't actually cover the back half of the head, but perhaps this is your own take on the headpiece. [link]

Can't really tell where the light source or sources are in the picture. The glint on some areas seem to suggest it's directly above her, in front of her, but more of the shadows point it to somewhere above her, between her back and wings, right above her shawl or something coils thrice around her hand. Her shawl/wings probably will pose some problems with shadows.

I think there are too many swathes of black throughout. Small areas like her fingers and shawl should just be darker instead of outright black.

Her arm looks somewhat weird to me, because of the size difference on the forearm versus her upper arm, but it might be perspective. The bulge below her thumb looks awkward as well.

Overall I would consider this an above average piece of work, but it doesn't feel like it has as much effort or eye on the details put into it as much as your other pieces.
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Its ok just need few adjustment on the metal helm and the shading is not even between the wings and the purple cloak.

The wings need more detail to bring out the fairness of the drawing and the breast pad need to be less shiny because it looks like rusty breast pad

Try to keep the size of the head balanced or it will be like alien cosplaying.

Need to have more hair on the breast

Overall certain area such as wing need to be more 3d-like and more shading to keep the whole picture balanced. Good work though and work hard to keep improving.
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elmaspbox Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love 
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tomytieneblas74 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Niiiiice ! :love:
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dcason Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Saw this on a website a while back and, thanks to your name change spent I don't know how long trying to find it on deviantart. It was worth it though.
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XxMariahtheRabbitxX Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this Digimon!but who does she evolve from again?^^;
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Serisegala Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Gatomon
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XxMariahtheRabbitxX Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh yes!that one! (i love gatomon alot.^^) when they finally gave her a little evolve form (salamon) i was even happier.
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AceOfKeys72 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmm her breasts appear a little flat (don't worry i'm not being a perv i got a bf) her wings as well but i think that has to do with the simple colors used. The pink cloth definitely has depth that i love. Also it would be awesome if you could do like an evolution from Angemon to Ophanimon. Power things up ;)
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dgmonmaster Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student Writer
An excellent homage to the anime, especially the first season and early Digimon characters. Compared to the official artwork this is an excellent and true rendition. The only thing that bugs me is that her chest seems to be larger on the left (her right) than on the right (her left). The armor covering that area also seems to have a different mold on the right than the left; the left being the closer of the two to the official version. Still, this is an amazing piece and I hope to see more anniversary images from you for this series ^^
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XxKataxX Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really nice ;3
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Burningcerberus Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
awesome beyond words!!!
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